This is a book i'm working on, can you give critique?

Despite what anyone else says, i think the prologue perfect! There is something very captivating about it! It certainly catches intrest and creates suspence! The imagery was very intriguing. The story so far is a lot like that too. A lot of suspense is created which is what will keep a reader reading. I must confess that this isn't exactly my type of story either, but i know quite a few people that would love it! Keep Writing!!!!